• Developmental Editing

    A developmental edit addresses big-picture elements in a manuscript. It addresses structure, content, and plot. It provides in-depth feedback on character development, pacing, and themes, helping to create a more cohesive and compelling story. I aim to strengthen the structure while elevating the emotional intensity and unique voice.

    What does a developmental editor evaluate?

    Goals, Motivation, & Conflict

    Character Arc

    Dialogue

    Plot Development

    World Building

    POV/Showing vs. Telling

    Momentum & Pace

    Voice 

    Theme

    Developmental edits will include a style sheet evaluating these aspects with suggestions for improvement and pointing out what's working. The service comes with an optional one-hour Zoom call to discuss the project. 

    Ask for a two-page sample today and determine if we are a fit for your editing needs. 

    Prices as listed may not be accurate. Cost averages $0.007 per word. 

  • Line Editing

    A line edit is a fine-toothed comb evaluation of a manuscript- scrutinizing sentence structure, word choice, paragraph organization, and other gremlins that give an author trouble. The goal is to enhance an author's intended message by creating stronger sentences and paragraphs while still maintaining the author's voice. This is a creative evaluation of the piece, done line by line, sentence by sentence, word by word. 

    What a line edit addresses:

    Consistency of Voice

    Tone

    Tense Consistency 

    POV Consistency

    Clarity/Conciseness 

    Consistent Terminology

    Identifying Echoes & Redundancy

    Identifying Glue Words and Repetitive Phrases

    Overused Words; Freshening Language

    Rhythm and Pacing; Variation

    Transitions—Sentences and Paragraphs

    Dialogue Tags 

    Any ideas/concepts that seem inconsistent through the story. 

    Service includes suggested changes using Track Changes in Word. The changes will be explained in the comments. 

    Also, a one-hour Zoom call is available after edits are complete. 

    Ask for a two-page sample today and determine if we are a fit for your editing needs. 

    Prices as listed may not be accurate. Cost averages $0.01 per word. 

    If you combine line editing and copy editing, receive a $0.003 per word discount and lock in the rate of $0.013.

  • Copy Editing

    Copy editing focuses on polishing a manuscript by addressing grammar, punctuation, spelling, and syntax to ensure technical accuracy. It also ensures consistency in style, tone, and formatting, aligning with established guidelines or the author’s preferences. This meticulous process ensures that the writing is clear, professional, and ready for publication. Unlike line editing, copy editing focuses only on the technical elements from the Chicago Manual of Style, leaving words and word order unchanged. 

    Specific items addressed in a copy editing service:

    Spelling and Hyphenation

    Punctuation (includes comma usage, dialogue punctuation, em dashes, dashes, ellipses, parentheses, and brackets)

    Capitalization (titles, proper nouns, initials, and acronyms)

    Numbers and Dates (spelled or not, date formatting, time formatting)

    Italics and Bold (titles of works, foreign words, emphasis)

    Formatting (headings, subheadings, lists, spacing, and indentation)

    Special Terms and Languages (glossary, consistency, cliches)

    Author Preferences (custom rules, areas needing extra attention, and preferred changes)

    Notes from the Editor (recommended clarifications, suggestions, and summary of all edits)

    All services come with a one-hour Zoom meeting to review edits at the request of the author. 

    Ask for a two-page sample today and determine if we are a fit for your editing needs. 

    Prices as listed may not be accurate. Cost averages $0.006 per word. 

    If you combine line editing and copy editing, receive a $0.003 per word discount and lock in the rate of $0.013.

Portfolio

Room 129

Boss of Me

Bought

Caged Beauty

Canadian Girl

Charmed by the CEO

Dating Experience

Dirty Escort

Dirty Mind

Dirty Revenge

Jasmine’s Rapture

Jatari

Julia’s Desire

Just Like Heaven

Love on Top

Mary’s Submission

Stripped Bare

Submission

The Bartender’s Boss

The Christmas Wish

Torin

Vesper Martinis

Violet’s Possession

"It's always a pleasure working with Write-On Studios. Heather's attention to detail, her knowledge in all things editing and her sincere investment in my projects has made me a repeat customer. I highly recommend Heather for all editorial needs."

The Prospect

Breaking Trey

Conquering Oz

Going Rogue

The Reckoning

"Heather is a godsend! I can safely say she makes me look good. Her work and her attention to detail are second to none. She is a great sounding board and will give me honest opinions on my work and steer me in the right direction if I go off course. She is flexible where other editors are not, and takes the time to explain her edits, which means, as a writer, I learn from her knowledge and experience. I know when I give any story to Heather, my manuscript is in safe hands."

The French Mis-Connection

Ice to Meet You

Flock and Roll

A Country Quandary

The Perfect Pick Up

The Daniel Dilemma

Second Chances with St. Nick

“I have used Write On Studios for most of my writing projects. I enjoy working with Heather. She catches all kinds of things and makes great suggestions. I plan to continue working with her for the foreseeable future.”

Tea Leaves and the Texan

Beachside Bakery

Unexpected Guests

Bayside Cottage

Born Ready

Peppermint Cocoa Christmas

Born Brave

Born Tough

Born Strong

Almond Cookie Christmas

Salt Bay Sunrise

Sugar Star Christmas

“More than a grammar Nazi! Heather immerses herself into the story and gives feedback on everything from positioning for sexy scenes to expanding on storylines to give the reader a better understanding. She has made me a better writer, and I am grateful for the opportunity to work with her.”

For Love or Fate

Friends or Fate

PS

PS Epilogue

Magically Mated

Mated Under the Mistletoe

Fated Solstice: An Island Wedding